Topless tuesday-Aurelie

Just looking at this piece, I'm not particularly enamoured with it. So, here's a few quick suggestions for improvement.

First of all, please do something with those little pink flaps in her hair. I am assuming they are bows but you need to place a little more emphasis on them because they look like Aurelie has invested in a set of pig ears.

Second point; her hair, head and face look far too big for the rest of her body. She's very ill proportioned here just now, and it does absolutely nothing for the image. The chest, the shoulders and arms above the elbows... far too broad in comparison to below the elbow. Again ill proportioned and it does nothing.

Third point; With Aurelie's job and her other committments, there's hardly any chance at all that she had a tummy that flat.

Fourth point; Her breasts aren't proprotioned well at all, they are far too big and they aren't sitting quite right. The lines curving round and up on the left breast, not really how breasts go. It looks as though you were just about to draw giant circles for the breasts but decided against it three quarters of the way through.

Good detail on the underwear though.